Rephrasing the sentence for Clarity
Sometimes a sentence may tend to misbehave – it really just doesn’t seem to fit, or feel right. When this happens (sometimes), take the particular sentence and re-arrange it. First off, mark the few important points of the sentence that really are important:D, and then rewrite it well so that you don’t lose the core of what you are trying to saying. Take this beautiful piece for example:
Saroah mentions having(still goes on) common sense, being practical, (still goes on) and he talks about appearances being(still goes on) important in that one should(still goes on) look a certain way but not(still goes on) necessarily act that way.
You can make this sentence way better by re-arranging it:
For Saroah, the “Qualities of a Prince” (still goes on) include: having commonsense, being practical, (still goes on) and constructing proper appearances.
The sentence becomes waaay stronger (like the examples in my previous items) and your esteemed readers can grasp the meaning without any trouble.
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